Editing video feedback and learner response

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 Teachers feedback:

WWW:

- Handheld tracking shot

-Good cinematography 

-Zoom/dissolve for transitions

-POV shot 

-Appropriate parallel sound

-Good planning

-Good use of foley sound (bottle smash)

-Good performance


EBI:  

-Abrupt ending

-Continuity error

-More match on action


Student feedback:

WWW:

-Good editing

-Good examples of match on action

-Good use of parallel sound

-Good sound effects

-Good acting

-Good zoom in/zoom out edits

-Lighting fits with the setting


EBI:

-Continuity

-More match on action

-Sound/music cuts off early


.In my editing practical video, I believe that I successfully met the brief as I included match on action (opening door/smashing glass bottle) and shot reverse shot where, I incorporated the 180 degree rule. This is clearly demonstrated when the characters are having a conversation.

.However, I think that I should've included more match on action as there were many missed opportunities to do so.

.In my next video, I will make sure that I don't end the video abruptly and instead, have a smooth ending. I will also ensure that I include match on action multiple times throughout the video, not just once.





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