Ignite presentation learner response

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 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

WWW:                                                                         EBI:                                                                    

.Good introduction                                                      .Avoid full sentences

.good concept, brand identity and billboard                .add images on every slide

.good media language                                                  .explain industry more

.fluent/good pace of delivery                                       .more research on blog 

.good reference to intertextuality

Research: 3/5

Concept: 4/5

Audience/industry: 3/5

Language: 3/5

Representation: 3/5

Delivery: 3/5


2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: a good introduction, brand identity and concept overall. Good reference to intertextuality, and good use of media language

EBI: Avoid having full sentences on slides, just key words/phrases and explain industry more, add more images to each slide in order to have a more engaging presentation.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

My presentation is helpful in guiding what I need to do for my coursework because I have distinguished all the topics I need to cover within my coursework and I have explained in a decent amount of detail about what I am going to do in order to portray those topics within my coursework. using feedback from my peers, I've realised that I need to explain in much more detail about what I am looking for in terms of industry for my coursework, so I plan on focusing on my aims for industry. I am also going to re-do my statement of intent because I need to add more detail and explain what my targets are for my coursework and how I am going to achieve them. I think that it is easily achievable to film my 3 TikToks with the resources I have available because my TikToks are supposed to be wholesome and in 'natural' environments, so that the audience can relate to the band members and create a bond with them. For my statement of intent, I'm going to include more media terminology because currently, my statement of intent is vague and I'm aiming for a highly detailed, well explained statement of intent which will, therefore, be helpful in achieving that.

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